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七律·无题
梦中得首联,醒后凑成完篇

十方清色十方秋,我葬清秋一段愁。
远隔无非山与海,相知惟有月如钩。
灰飞今夜蒹葭管,云邈当年白鹭洲。
大泽芙蓉含露死,流光暗渡曝衣楼。


金缕曲·听《Room of Angel》


渐薄春寒里,是谁耶、恹恹耳畔,低吟生死。沉入安然深黑色,十万鲸鲵浅寐。咒语是、别来休记。隐隐晨钟星半坠,有鲛人,阖上青眸子。犹笑道,未曾悔。

繁花谢在冰河纪。到如今,悲欢尽忘,倦书回忆。醒后轮回三千场,聚散依然若水。算不得、今生今世。碧落天涯相思海,正吹来、淡淡咸滋味。如我血,似君泪。

最喜欢这句:Here's a lullaby to close your eyes, goodbye


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音乐没听到啊老木
最喜欢这句:I can't find  words to explain how much I love you

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You lie, silent there before me .
Your tears, they mean nothing to me.
The wind, howling at the window
The love you never gave, I give to you -really don't deserve it -
but now, there's nothing you can do
So sleep in your only memory
And weep, my dearest mother
Here's a lullaby to close your eyes, (goodbye)
It was always you that I despised
I don't feel enough for you to cry, (oh my)
Here's a lullaby to close your eyes, (goodbye goodbye)...
So insignificant
Sleeping dormant deep inside of me
Are you hiding away, lost Under the sewers
Maybe flying high In the clouds
Perhaps you're happy without me
So many seeds have been sown on the field
And who could sprout up so blessedly if I had died
I would have never felt sad at all
You will not hear me say I'm sorry
Where is the light Wonder if it's weeping somewhere
Here's a lullaby to close your eyes, goodbye
It was always you that I despised
I don't feel enough for you to cry, oh my
Here's a lullaby to close your eyes, goodbye goodbye...

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七律一三联真好啊。词有些和西丝的词味同了。这音乐有些沉闷虚无了。小木心情似不太好
在国外啊。。多多珍重。

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我来看了几回,始终不敢妄言。这两首文字都似有江湖儿女生死契阔缠绵之情。妹妹在国外吗?听些快乐的曲子,可解相思之苦,思乡之愁呵。
梦里飞天,曾经沧海

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梦中得滴句子,果然不凡,最喜此句了.

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原帖由 无剑 于 2008-7-22 18:56 发表
七律一三联真好啊。词有些和西丝的词味同了。这音乐有些沉闷虚无了。小木心情似不太好
在国外啊。。多多珍重。
木木强悍的很捏,我看好木木,木木要是真被人欺负了,拿着两把刀就过去 呵呵

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大泽芙蓉含露死

悲中有狷
柳絮浮萍两不如
霜枫一夜过姑苏
谁怜病酒空知我
一曲红颜成倦图

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相知惟有月如钩
自作多情一下

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原来木槿械在这里:)这歌好听啊

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